yo
recently i've been trying to make music and shit
(example below)
and i would like you guys to give me some tips to improve
that's all lol
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Slight disclaimer, but I'm no heavily experienced person when it comes to music theory and music production, only focusing on it for about 1-2 months, but I HAVE been practicing piano for a solid 6 years and have been interested in general music since then as well. Take my advice with a grain of salt, as I'm no pro. I think it's not as much of a problem of a melody more than it is structuring of the song and the instrumental. I noticed how it's only under 2 minutes compared to other songs, and my own tutor showed me that song structure is fundamental to make a longer song. However, if that's not something you're bothered by, since structure isn't as impactful as instrumental progression (so i dub it), it probably lies within the lack of any progress going on for the song. It's not inherently a bad thing if used in a certain context, however that dull feeling of not moving anywhere with the music makes it stale and dry quickly. It's a very hollow instrumental compared to what other good or popular composers have, like how there's only a bit of drums and a small plucking sound, and it only intensified near the end, but no progression was being made with the vocals themselves, let alone the drums or the tension of the song in general. Again, I'm no pro but I think the melody/vocals are fine, despite some weaknesses that I myself can't explain, but the instrumental and possibly the structure trying to encapsulate and utilize it are underwhelming. You're probably aware of this but don't put too many loud and strong instruments in either, otherwise it'll just sound like white noise.