What are your opinions on the song and what can i do to improve it?
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this is solid! here are a few things i would fix: - try and extend the length of the piano pattern from 4 beats to 8 beats. by changing the chord progression the second time around, it'll help the song feel less repetitive - move the second note in the drumstick pattern to beat 2. this'll help the song feel less disjointed - right now, the bass feels a bit too prominent and ends up drowning out the vocals. i would recommend using an EQ to remove some of the bassier frequencies to help it fit more into the background (the same goes for the oscillator that appears near the end) - the bass pattern is a little too complex, which, combined with the bass's prominence in the song, leads to it and the vocals clashing. i would recommend simplifying the bass pattern to help the vocals stand out more - the faster-paced ending to the song feels pretty empty due to the lack of lower-frequency instruments, so i would recommend adding a bass pattern to the end - while i'm on the topic, the ending also feels pretty abrupt. while there are a lot of ways to properly conclude a song, one simple way would be to basically repeat the intro, but remove the buildup hope this helps!